Sunday, March 7, 2010

Stranger

In that quiet corner of the park, he had made this bench permanent as his seat. Not sure where he came from, but he would make it a point to sit on the bench, one afternoon after the other. Right from the time the sun would tilt into the western horizon, till the time it would finally set … almost covering the entire afternoon into the evening. He remained seated there … watching the proceedings around. All alone, all by himself.

The town wasn’t his, neither anyone could recollect having seen him or met him in distant past. But the way he would sit on the bench, one would assume that he has made this town a home.

Was he alone? None would ever know.

Clad in his signature costume – a faded pair of denims and a khaki half-shirt – he would be seen visiting the park everyday, and slowly everyone would have considered him a valid resident of the town.

But was he a permanent resident? Who would ever know?

From the point he entered the park, till the time he left his seat, one could see him looking tirelessly around. The children, the youth and the elderly whoever visited the park never missed his sight. Yet none exactly knew where he lived. And when he left his seat, he would simply vanish outside the park … until the next afternoon when he would be back at the park again.

Where would he leave for? Guess none would ever know.

Stranger would be a nicer qualification for him. But then he was a stranger who was a regular, so much so that the visitors to the park could vouch for him that he would come and sit on that bench, his permanent seat, around the stipulated time.

There were days when he would keep looking upwards, towards the sky. May be, he lost someone who he felt was up there. He kept looking up as if that person would peep out among the clouds any time for one last look at him. But as it often happens, the look never resulted in anything significant … he got a bit dissatisfied looking upwards.

What would he be looking for? None would ever know the answer.

Most of the remaining time, he would be looking around … or stare constantly at a group, whether it was a bunch of children or a group of young people didn’t matter.

He would smile, or sometimes frown at the happenings around. But he would never talk … nor even attempt to even start a conversation with anyone around. Those in the park were used to his presence, and behaved as if he was known. In short, he had slowly started to become a known stranger!

One day, a group of young girls were having a joyful time enjoying an animated conversation. The stranger heard and was curiously amused. He seemed interested and wanted to get into it. So he tried to call some in the group. He waved his hands at the group and tried to call any one of them, but remained silent as he wasn’t sure of their names. His hesitancy was evident, but he just wanted to relate to their talks.

At first the girls didn’t see him wave at him … but were soon apprehensive of his gesture.

Most of them got scared seeing his hand pointing at them. There were faces that were afraid to even speak out. Having seen him regularly wasn’t all that difficult, but to see him make this gesture frightened them. They would sense something was suspicious, and seeing him look at them made them a wee bit uncomfortable too.

The initial hesitation over, most girls in the group were of the opinion to leave that place. This would mean that the stranger would no longer be able to even spot them or even try to follow them. To move out of the park meant a safer way to avoid an interaction with an unknown person.

Soon they left the place, and the park slowly started to become normal again. The stranger, with a disappointed face, kept looking at the way the girls took to exit the place. His face expressed the hidden frustration.

May be he had something to ask them, but none would ever know what it was for.

A stranger that he was, he remained a stranger even though he had become so known as the person sitting on his permanent seat.

18 comments:

simply me said...

he he he... a beautiful one... well the beauty of the stranger lies in just being the stranger that he was anything more the beauty vanishes :)
waiting for more posts to come sooner t.c.
and hope u enjoying at pune :)

itsyvitsy said...

Ha! Amazing the way you told it. He came in a stranger, became "familiar" as a stranger and remained "unfamiliar" being a regular. His presence intrigued, yet scared the others out of their wits. The eerie silence about him keeping even the keenest from starting a conversation. Sometimes people have an intimidating aura about them even when they haven't spoken or done anything. I saw the labels you have put, and I see the loner that he is. A loner that always remained a loner, even when he did not wish to be.

Maya said...

you have got something for parks kya..

Bhagyashree said...

Very true, nowadays a stranger remains a stranger

Chhaya said...

I see just a hint of the JU camus here.. but i know the place has changed to a quiet Park in Pune.

the place seems to be growing on u :)

IdleMind said...

@ simply me - thanks, yaar! this was difficult, having not touched the keyboard to create for two long months.

@ Vittaldas Prabhu - well commented, this 'familiarity' of a stranger intrigues me a lot.

@ Uncommon Sense - the way I see it, almost every environment resembles a park! easier for me to explore!! hehehe

@ Bhagyashree - you are right, the world's getting strange.

@ Chhaya - why only JU? it can be the one in Pune, that could be one out of many possibilities!

Anitha Rajesh said...

We are all like that stranger .We are destined to behave in a frame of particular pattern Even a slight change in that pattern will raise the eyebrows of those around us. Ironically 90 % of that frame is our own creation and the rest, those around us… ..Better avoid the patterns in life as early as possible… And your writing ..no words. I simply love to read it..

Nikki... said...

The stranger who did not wish to remain a stranger,but destiny willed otherwise..

I feel at some point or the other, we all become strangers to ourselves and to the people who seemingly knows us. Some actions/reactions surprises us and we wonder where did that come from.. WE want to do something, but it does not go with the image we have created of oruselves, so we subdue the urge, and the occassional expression of our desires makes people wonder at us..

I guess I got a bit philosophical after reading this post :)

Hope you have settled down in Pune.. I love the place..Any chance meeting with Ink Tank?

IdleMind said...

@ Gita Bhagvad - I was amused by the mathematics that you presented, let that theory be avoided as early as possible.

@ Nikki - u got philosophical? that's my good fortune, yeah, part of it was to invoke the philosophy of readers, so I guess there was a shade of success in writing such stories! :)

Will meet InkTank for sure, but when ... where, yet unknown!!

Anitha Rajesh said...

…and no one knows where we are from and where we are going… always appear in the same costume..aquires a particular place in life. Familiar to all at the same time a stranger to those around…Wow !! Idle, could find more and more meaning…

IdleMind said...

@ Gita - keep analyzing ... even I may not have thought that much the way you folks are igniting my brain cells!! thanks my friend ... this is fascinating.

Tongue Trip said...

mostly computer issues and likewise, glad to see you back too. so, how goes it? accommodated? acclimatized? attuned?
A remarkable contrast embodies this post, a some what sullen reserve as opposed to the accentuated cheerful surrounding goes beyond the park. people are strange when youre a stranger..women seem wicked when youre unwanted..says Jim Morrison.

Anonymous said...

What would he be looking for?

full of suspense,, nice interesting post..!!

mere diaaag me bahot questions hai
1. wo ajnabee hritik jaisa handsome hota to... end would be dancing,
2. agar wo sharukh jaisa dikhta hota to,, end would be romantic, and hakla also ;P
3. agar wo aamir jaisa dikhta hota to..( to dusre do question uthte.. sar pe baal the ya ghajini tha)
4. agar wo akshay kumar jaisa dikh raha hota to.. to bahot baatein karta, ladki pataake le jaata
5. aur agar emraan hashmi jaisa hota to...?


hmm,, xactly.. mujhe lag raha hai ki emraan jaisa hi dikh raha hoga.. :P ladkiyan darr gayi :P

IdleMind said...

@ Tongue Trip - yeah, getting accommodated and settled as fast as I can.

A sullen reserve is mandated for the negation of familiarity. As for wicked women, no comments.:) These women were required to mostly punctuate a sense of normal avoidance, male characters don't quite serve that well.

@ CrAzYy..!;) - aapne to aur kuchh hi samajh liya ... lekin this was interesting too. Aap Emraan pe itna khafa kyon hain ji? ;)

Anonymous said...

nahi ji....... me aapki post ko to samaj paaya hun thik thik..
lekin mera comment karne ka jo idea tha..
wo tha ku6 un-thik.. q ki, ye subject is something hatke thing,
and thoda bahot bhaari bhaari thing,,

so,, mene parle monaco ke jaisa halka pulka kurkura cmment dena achha samja.. kyun ki aakhir
ajnabeeyon se na akhiya milaana
ajnabeeyonko hai ek din jaana!

so monaco khao.. daant jagmagaao
(mocaco khao .. daant jagmagaao is my upcoming agenda to writing hatke thing)

swapnanjali said...

strangers....... ...there is one lesson in moral education...
Never allow strangers ...so all just afraid of strangers...hey Idle is that you in Pune...:) ...
Well we all taught from our childhood ...never allow strangers so that incidence might happened...and they way the stranger waves hand is also not that good ...anyways nicely expressed ...we shouldn't react to people instantly...what the girl did...thy need to understand that stranger might want some information and all

IdleMind said...

@ CrAzYy ..! ;) - monaco ka kamaal ... Crazy saab ka dhamaal. Mujhe to lagta hain ki aap abhi shuru ho jao hatke likhne ke liye, lekin khud tikey raho park mein, hatna mat!! hehe

@ swapna - there's nothing called strangers in this world. Strangers are those who become friends, even the mother is a stranger when the child is born.

In this case, the stranger may have just wanted to say something. His expression was something the girls didn't like.

We do go back to the moral education ... btw, how do u like these strangers writing together here in the park?

ajeet singh said...

he he nice one , we sometimes fail to understand others feelings. we sometime tend to forget that external look is not always a truth about someone....